Yeah, it's pretty awesome, although I think the ending drags a bit compared to the wonderfully lolcatful first half. Of course I wouldn't bother critiquing if it wasn't so good to begin with.
well, there's only so much you can do with the limited range of allowable verb constructions and spelling conventions governing lolcat discourse, after all.
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